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Posted by Dani Kellogg
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Dani Kellogg
Full Stack JavaScript Techdegree Student 16,734 Points

Looking for some constructive criticism.

Hi Everyone,

I have just been working on this faux Doctor Who site (recently binged 7 seasons on Netflix and it was on my mind, lol) and I was hoping some of you might be able to offer some constructive criticism, suggestions, etc.

Most of the text is from a Doctor Who lorem ipsum generator and it is still very much a work in progress, but I thought it might be helpful to have another pair of eyes check it out.

http://www.dashcreativ.com/tardis.html

Thanks in advance :)

3 Answers

Kelvin Atawura
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Kelvin Atawura
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Kelvin Atawura
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Kelvin Atawura
Front End Web Development Techdegree Student 19,022 Points

l am not designer but even that l dont like the found. perhaps something more nicer?

Alexander Stanuga
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Alexander Stanuga
Alexander Stanuga
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Looks good. might be worth using some of those purple colours from the constellation photograph in your header in other aspects of the site, maybe H2 titles. Also I might consider differentiating the <p>'s a little more from the headings.

Also I'm not sure if your p text needs to be slightly larger, or you need to create more columns, some of the text spans too wide and could be a little difficult to read.

Hope that helps

Dani Kellogg
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Dani Kellogg
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Dani Kellogg
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Dani Kellogg
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Thanks for the feedback guys, very helpful! :)