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JavaScript JavaScript Basics (Retired) Storing and Tracking Information with Variables The Variable Challenge

Lanie Williamson
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Lanie Williamson
Courses Plus Student 11,390 Points
Posted by Lanie Williamson
Lanie Williamson
Courses Plus Student 11,390 Points

My Story Maker Challenge. Any improvements?

Here is my Story Maker Challenge. Any suggestions/improvements welcome. Thanks!

var person = prompt("Welcome to The Story Maker.  Please answer each question. First, name a person you know:");
var verb = prompt("Now enter a verb.");
var partOfBody = prompt("Finally enter a part of the body.");
var story = "Jack and " + person + " went up the hill ";
alert("Thanks for playing!  Now read your story.");
story += "to " + verb + " a pail of water.  ";
story += "Jack fell down and broke his " + partOfBody + " and " + person; 
story += " came tumbling after.";
document.write(story);

1 Answer

Ken Alger
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Ken Alger
Treehouse Teacher
Ken Alger
Ken Alger
Treehouse Teacher

Lanie;

Nice project. It has been a while since I went through JS Basics, but perhaps adding some language "censoring" might be a nice touch. Something to prevent "Jill" from playing perhaps as we all know what happens when she goes up the hill.

Great work!

Ken